Title: Weather Witch
Author: Shannon Delany
Genre: YA Paranormal
Publication Date: June 25, 2013
Format: Paperback, 336 Pages
ISBN-10: 125001851X (Macmillan)
ISBN-13: 978-1250018519 (Macmillan)
Reviewed by: Bridget
In a vastly different and darker Philadelphia of 1844, steam power has been repressed, war threatens from deep, dark waters, and one young lady of high social standing is expecting a surprise at her seventeenth birthday party–but certainly not the one she gets!
Jordan Astraea, who has lived out all of her life in Philadelphia’s most exclusive neighborhood, is preparing to celebrate her birthday with friends, family and all the extravagance they might muster. The young man who is most often her dashing companion, Rowen Burchette, has told her a surprise awaits her and her best friend, Catrina Hollindale, wouldn’t miss this night for all the world!
But storm clouds are gathering and threatening to do far more than dampen her party plans because someone in the Astraea household has committed the greatest of social sins by Harboring a Weather Witch
Quick & Dirty: This story had a lot of potential with an intriguing idea, but unfortunately the writing style left me very confused and lost for most of the book.
Opening Sentence: A banner snapped out on the pole high above the restrained seventeen- year- old boy, straightening to its full length
This book is set in Philadelphia in the year 1844. The weather is controlled by the mysterious Weather Witches. A Weather Witch has the power to control the weather in any way and is considered very dangerous. Having magic in your blood is an abomination, and if you are caught you are sent to the Maker. The Maker is a man who knows how to get witches to show their true powers by torching them and breaking their will. Being a witch would mean the ruin of not only you but all the members in your household, so for the nobility there is nothing worse than harboring a witch.
Jordan Astraea is a beautiful young noble girl about to turn 17. She is going to have a very fashionable party and be introduced to society. She is part of a very well off family that has a good rank. Jordan will be surrounded by all her close friends and she hopes to figure out some of her feelings toward her long time friend and beau Rowen. But Jordan’s night doesn’t go at all like she planned. The Warden shows up and she is accused of being a witch a test is performed and she fails. Jordan is taken away to Holgate to meet the Marker. Jordan knows that she is innocent, but she doesn’t know if she will survive the making process that will prove she is no witch.
Jordan was my favorite character in the book. She is sweet, beautiful and full of attitude. Even though she is put through many trials, Jordan doesn’t give up. She holds onto the feelings she has for a boy that holds a special place in her heart. Being put through so much makes her realize how much she truly cared for him.
Rowen can’t believe that Jordan could be a witch. He has known her his whole life and considers her one of his best friends. Of course he’s not in love with her, but he is fiercely loyal to her and will go to great lengths to prove her innocence. He’s also a great looking guy, funny, charming, and a great character.
This book had so much potential, but honestly it fell really short for me. The story was told from so many different points of view that I found myself having to backtrack all the time to figure out whose head I was in. For most of the book I had no idea what was going on. It was defiantly the writing style that was really confusing, which was too bad because I felt the story had good potential. I enjoyed some of the characters, but others I felt were totally unnecessary. The book had a very abrupt ending so I’m guessing there has to be another book coming out, but honestly, I don’t know how interested I am in reading it. Overall, I really wanted to like this book, but I just couldn’t with all of the flaws in it.
Catrina and Rowen both stepped forward.
“Be brave, Jordan,” Catrina said. “Yes. If you are so certain— test her. Before us all. Prove you are correct or leave this house.”
Rowen’s head lowered, but he caught Jordan’s eyes.
It was the surest way to prove her innocence.
The Warden released her but when the Tester drew his blade, Jordan pulled back, “No” tumbling from her lips as well.
Catrina stomped forward and looked Jordan in the eyes.
So many eyes were on her, so many intense stares seeking her out she had no idea who to turn to. So she chose the one closest. Catrina. Her best friend. The same one who had introduced her to Rowen. The girl who was so much like her sister . . . Jordan swallowed again and nodded.
“I will hold your hand,” Catrina offered. “It will only be a little cut— nothing that will mar your perfect skin for long,” she assured. “Surely it will not leave her scarred, will it?”
The Tester said, “One can never tell.”
Jordan trembled. All she had were her looks . . . And her rank.
The sky rumbled overhead and everyone jumped.
“But what harm is a small scar when it proves you’re innocent?” Catrina said, so close to Jordan’s face their noses nearly touched.
“Yes,” Jordan agreed. “Yes. Hold my hand,” she asked so gently the crowd stepped forward to hear. “Test me so my mother’s good name might be restored.”
Catrina clutched her hand and the Tester changed his position ever so slightly, the knife glimmering. Jordan closed her eyes and bit down on her lower lip, her fingers going white around Catrina’s as the blade nipped her right forearm.
Sparks flew up from Jordan, Catrina fell back, her face contorted in horror, and above them all the heavens opened and dumped rain until there was no noise save the rush of water.
Catrina trembled, clutching at Rowen, and Jordan fell to her knees, sobbing the one word on everyone’s lips—No.
FTC Advisory: St. Martin’s Griffin/Macmillan provided me with a copy of Weather Witch. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
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